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Than Bauk

 

Than Bauk - That's Life, Stress Relief & Cheers

 

          The Than Bauk (also Thanbauk) is a short, humorous type of poem, similar to an epigram.  It is an old Burmese form which consists of at least three lines of only four syllables per line. An important part of the Than Bauk is it's descending rhyme pattern which is the same as the begining of the Ya-Du form. 

          The last syllable of the first line, the third syllable of the second line and the second syllable of the last line must all rhyme.

          More verses can be added using that same pattern for each verse. More lines can also be added by creating a descending chain of rhymes following that same pattern. The schematic view below will clarify the rhyme pattern:

 

For two or more verses:

x x x a

x x a x 

x a x x

 

x x x b

x x b x

x b x x

etc.

 

Descending chain patttern:        

x x x a

x x a x

x a x b

x x b x

x b x c

x x c x

x c x d 

etc.

 

Where x,a,b,c and d = 1 syllable and a,b,c and d = the placement of the rhyming syllable.

 

Than Bauk examples:

 

That's Life

 

I wonder why

minutes fly by

on my days off!

 

 

Stress Relief

 

Warm breezes blow,

no sorrow here,

no snow or rain.

 

Just bright sunshine,

weather's fine and

the wine flows free.

 

Dream on, relax,

forget taxes.

But facts intrude.

 

And so you wake,

but that break you

have taken helps!

 

 

Cheers

 

Tea will suffice

not as nice though

as ice cold beer

to make cheery

those dreary times

when sun climbs high

and primes the heat.